Commentary for bus stop love

Music used in the short film is called romantic acoustic and is copyright free, which means we are able to use it

 We start off with an establishing shot of the bus driving away and then pan onto Joey, which then goes into a zoom.

 We then go into a close up oh joeys face as he looks up and then there is an eye line match of the bus stop timetable and then back to joeys face as he reacts by sighing.

 There is then a medium long shot as Amelia makes her first entrance walking towards the bus stop we then see a close up of Joey as he reacts to Amelia walking past this shows the potential relationship to the viewer there is then a point of view of Joey as she walks past and this shows joeys interest.

There is then a track of Joey as he walks towards the bus stop form his left side, it then goes into a medium close up as he takes out his phone we then see another eye line match as he looks at the time on his phone.

 We then cut to a medium long shot of Amelia as she is walking up to the bus stop and then there is a reaction shot as Joey fixes his hair after seeing her coming this again shows his interest in her

 A matching on action then comes in as it transitions from day 2 to day 3 he has his head down and then on the next day raises his head on the next day he the goes to sit down and there is a medium shot of him at the bus stop this then transitions into a pan and we see Amelia walking past we then see two point of views as they both smile at each other. And then another point of view as Joey watches her walk away 

We then cut to day 4 were we see Joey walking towards the bus stop in the rain we then see his point of view as he sees Amelia and then back to a medium long shot of him walking toward her they are both in shot showing the relationship. It then cuts to a medium shot of the bus stop and Joey attempts to make conversation. Although this does not work and we have a change of shot to another angle as Amelia goes on the phone

We then transition to a shot of Joey walking into frame from the right and going to once again sit at the bus stop and then to a medium close up as he looks into his bag to get a drink this then cuts to a medium shot of him from a right angle we then see another point of view as Joey loos left and right.

 This then cuts to a medium long shot of Amelia and her lesbian lover walking towards the bus stop as Joey looks at them they then stop in front of Joey and show some affection we then see a point of view from Joey as Amelia gets onto the bus and the doors close.